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Hi Lew,
I took it away from Nancy and have been reading it in bits and pieces ... it was time well spent. You are right that mosaic describes it as it really is a set of ordered tiles.
As you might guess, I wish you'd spent more time on Sun Flower, how you built her and how she ended up where she did.
Maybe you should expand one chapter at a time and submit them to literary magazines or other publications that would like your literary painting of moods and description of short vignettes.
I think you should be very happy with it. I sure enjoyed getting to know you through it.
-Sven
I took it away from Nancy and have been reading it in bits and pieces ... it was time well spent. You are right that mosaic describes it as it really is a set of ordered tiles.
As you might guess, I wish you'd spent more time on Sun Flower, how you built her and how she ended up where she did.
Maybe you should expand one chapter at a time and submit them to literary magazines or other publications that would like your literary painting of moods and description of short vignettes.
I think you should be very happy with it. I sure enjoyed getting to know you through it.
-Sven